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15 July 2012 @ 07:33 pm
[13] Valley of the Dolls  

valley of the dolls
Pairing: Jonghyun x Key
Rating: r
Word Count: 1120w
Summary: It wasn't everyday that Jonghyun saw something this nice.
Note: I made a joke about pinup boy Key on tumblr and this happened.

It wasn't everyday that Jonghyun saw something this nice.

Actually he hasn't seen anything soft and beautiful and nice ever since he was deployed out in the village barracks. The endless days and years of mud, rain and men with body odor only did so much for him. After the first month, even his hand lost its touch and nowadays he could only sigh tiredly before rolling over to sleep, his appetite weakly satisfied, pants uncomfortably sticky, and hands smelling like cum.

But today was his lucky day.

He had been sent into the city to pick up the General only to find out that the General's plane was delayed by a day. The man at the service desk had jealously told him to spend the night at the only empty room in hotel, at the military's expense, to wait. The room was bare and a bit drab, but Jonghyun was the type to look on the bright side and quickly found an aspect of the room that he was appreciative of, the view. The window was wide, spacious, and overlooked a small garden sparsely decorated with small trees and bushes. But that wasn't what Jonghyun liked about the view, he was most appreciative in what he could peer into the private rooms across the way.

In actuality it was more of a private photography studio, one that specialized in pinup modeling. Because of his time spent in the army, Jonghyun has seen his fair share of pinups, tucked away in lockers and hidden in mattresses. A few of the photos that he has seen were subtly sensual while others were blatantly wanton. And although Jonghyun was a busy man, he knew how to appreciate beauty in various shapes and forms.

The studio was situated perfectly that, if Jonghyun was lying on his back, propped up on the single hotel bed pillow, he could easily see every dip and curve of the silken smooth bodies posed on richly embroidered chaises and elegant chairs. Life was great. Model after gorgeous model had come and gone and had their photos taken, each exuding their own sense of style and appeal. After spending an embarrassing amount of time staring at the generous curves of a lovely redhead and the long limbs of a stunning blonde, Jonghyun had to run to the bathroom to relieve himself.

When he came back he could feel his jaw metaphorically hit the ground and smack against the front doors of hell. In his pre-military days, Jonghyun has seen his fair share of pretty girls, and today, his share of fetching pinup models, but he had troubles breathing as he saw a someone more beautiful than all the other girls in his life.

It was a pinup boy.

He found himself in a stupor as he stared at the male. By now the set has changed, a simple bed was centered in the room, dark sheets nearly melting into the blackened wood of the walls. Lounging daintily on the sheets, across thousands of feathers, was the boy. He was young, perhaps a year or two younger than Jonghyun himself, and was dressed simply in a pair of white lace stockings and striped panties. He could feel himself becoming more damned as he drank in every single moment of the model's shoot.

Obsidian eyes sparkled coyly in the studio lights, daring the photographer for a better model than he. As the boy rolled playfully on his side and sat up gracefully, Jonghyun could feel pleasant heat pool at the pit of his gut as he focused on a rounded bottom and the softest looking tummy, one that tensed with every brush of a feather, sensitive like a newborn babe. Jonghyun couldn't help but moan loudly when rouged lips pouted childishly, in a gesture of supposed innocence. Supposed, as Jonghyun felt the weight of the sultry gaze burn through his system like the most dangerous drug. The boy was now splayed on his back, soft body spread out for all to see, feathers strewn everywhere, hands tangled in his own honey brown hair.

By now Jonghyun had once again scrambled for his trouser buttons, hands clumsily trying to unbutton and loosen up, desperately trying to relieve the painful erection that had formed. He hissed not so quietly as he wrapped the rough pads of his fingers around his dick, just in time to see the boy smile sweetly at Jonghyun's window. A stocking clad leg was raised high in the air in a show of flexibility before a garter was eased down a milky thigh. The boy tossed his head back as he toyed with the lace garter, material curled obscenely around fingers before it was brushed across his own chest, across small perky nipples. A quiet moan could be heard, just above the sounds of Jonghyun furiously sliding his hands across his erection.

Jonghyun could feel that telltale tightening of his abdomen as he felt an orgasm coming. With one last longing look at the boy, the boy who was still on bed, this time teasing the small striped panties off his bottom, Jonghyun came all over his hand.

He laid on the bed, breath catching as he could feel his heart struggle to maintain itself, body overcome with exhaustion, stress, and pent-up sexual need. Lifting himself back up just a few inches, he could still make out the window. To his disappointment the boy's panties were still not shed. However to his delight, the boy was currently sitting up, dial phone in hand, plush thighs spread attractively as he pretended to call a lover.

Jonghyun gave a yelp and fell off of his bed when his hotel phone rang. Staring suspiciously at the device, he let it ring twice before answering.

"...hi? Hello? This is room 0923 speaking." Despite his current state of mind, Jonghyun knew better than to give away his position in the army. He was the youngest lieutenant in his squad's history and he liked to keep that honor.

"I saw you looking. Did you enjoy the view?"

The soldier stared at the phone, large eyes clouded in confusion. He didn't recognize the slightly whiny voice on the other line.


"I said, did you enjoy the view from your hotel room? Because I sure did."

Jonghyun turned around only to see the pinup boy on the balcony, wrapped in a tiny silk robe, phone casually tucked in the crook of his shoulder. The boy's dark eyes glittered as he could feel Jonghyun's gaze lock in on his bare thighs. He turned and glided back into the darkened depths of the room.

The smooth voice chuckled into the phone. "I'll take that as a yes."

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chinese soup: heartlemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:14 am (UTC)
thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed ^^

honestly i'm surprised that nobody has done pinup boy au! it's a highly underrated genre. i was trying to aim for the dita von teese kind of classy sensuality but i don't think anyone can be like her.

the stars will sing of us: chibi!cas :'3xdenisex on July 16th, 2012 03:59 am (UTC)
mmmm this was really creative and kinda perfect ;~;

and key would be such a tease
chinese soup: balloonslemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:15 am (UTC)
in my mind key is never not a tease. that's part of why i like him so much.

thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed this ^^
stolenflower: keystolenflower on July 16th, 2012 04:53 am (UTC)
oh god. just oh goddddd.

Key as a pin up boy? oh god all over again.

Jonghyun, you lucky bastard. you must be so glad that the general was behind schedule.
...what i would do to be in your place NO! WHAT AM I? A PEEPING TOM? heck yes

I wonder if anything happens between them after this...
does Key continue to torture Jonghyun like the tease he is or does Jonghyun leave forever and never come back to rescue his damsel in distress? oh the tragedy!

you're an amazing writer and I absolutely adore all of your writings~

(I hope you don't get tired of things quickly because I think I'm going to tell you this every time I comment on something of yours. I REGRET NOTHING.

chinese soup: psglemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:18 am (UTC)
key's thighs would look so good in stockings and garters, just saying :P

i don't have plans for a sequel. in all honesty i wrote this pretty much on the fly and after i got a frantic message from my friend on tumblr for it.

thank you so much for all your comments! sometimes i don't exactly know how to respond to them because they are so stellar ;~; you're sweet and i'm so happy that you like my stuff. ♥
d.b: OPPAAA SARANGHÄJOO *3*hitsujiga on July 16th, 2012 02:20 pm (UTC)
i read it on ur tumblr and i think i might have to read it again 8D
key and pinup is perfect and key in stockings hadbgsjdksdksdhgaj /mind in the gutter
jjong is one lucky guy tbh ♥____♥ i'd like that view everyday~
chinese soup: jjonglemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:21 am (UTC)
hehehe thank you unnir~

this started out as a whim as a joke to a tag that i had and before i knew it i was writing fic. gdi.

e_nicolae_nicola on July 17th, 2012 02:47 am (UTC)
lmao omg key is so sexy! lucky jonghyun!!!
im so jealous....
chinese soup: fashunlemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:21 am (UTC)
I think everyone would be jealous, let's be real. Thank you for reading ^^
moved to new journal (≧∇≦): dont give a f*cksmartstar501 on July 17th, 2012 11:31 am (UTC)
I hope this can have a sequel! It's really awesome and hot. Jjong's feelings are portrayed so well.
chinese soup: fashunlemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:24 am (UTC)
I don't have plans for one! But maybe i'll be inspired again one day! Thank you for reading ^^
The Queen of Disaster~k_pop4life on July 17th, 2012 04:22 pm (UTC)
Woah this reminds me of a little scene of a porn movie I watched a while ago. Except here is two boys and not two girls but...anyways key is gorgeous!!!!
I love the white lace and the feathers thing oh goodness I fall in love with jongkey a little bit more everyday and jonghyun being in the military is just... Almskqknsnfnwja not that I want him to go to the army but he fits this scenario perfectly.
I'm sort of dissapointed that they didn't get to properly meet each other and fuck each other senseless.
I loved everything about this /rolls around in mountain of jongkey feels
chinese soup: fashunlemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:32 am (UTC)
Jonghyun's recent bout of muscles is almost perfect for a military scenario story. That boy is so built!

Having them meet and fuck would go against what I wanted Key to emulate, I wanted the pinup motif to stay. That Key is only meant to be seen, admired, stared at but Jonghyun would never get a chance to touch. Likewise, Key only teases with artistic near flashes, but he never shows everything.

I tinkered with the idea of having him in black lace, but I felt that white lace would go better with the feathers.

Thank you for reading ^^
OptimusFanGirl: gifoptimusfangirl on July 19th, 2012 01:29 am (UTC)
Just. WOW.
Key a pinup boy? I mean, he was like MADE for this AU.

I love it, and he would be such a tease it's almost ridiculous.

Jonghyun always getting lucky xD
chinese soup: balloonslemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:35 am (UTC)
His Sherlock photos were just stunning weren't they? Ugh.

Thanks for reading!
kay.: Tiffany1sakay on July 22nd, 2012 01:43 am (UTC)
Curse me all you want to, but I just love the little naughty ideas like these.

You wrote this really, really well - and I shall secretly hope for a sequel of this. xD
chinese soup: heartlemon_skies on July 26th, 2012 09:39 am (UTC)
Wah! Thank you for commenting. I am a fan of your writing as well, so I'm so happy that you like this ^^ ♥

I don't have plans for a sequel, but I'm so attached to the idea of pinup boy Key that I want more of it myself .__. If Key drops another photoshoot that is like the Sherlock album photos then, well. :3 Ugh that photo in your icon, he is such an aesthetically pleasing human, I can't deal with him sometimes.
kay.: Key2sakay on July 26th, 2012 03:11 pm (UTC)
Key is a perfect human being and all is right with the universe as long as he exists okei okei.

And whaaaaaat how do I these closet fans IDGI.
But you should totally write more jfc I want to see how their sex relationship would work. :3